Aviation Museum
the aviation museum was super fun when we first got there we got to look at a plane that was used in world war 2 and could carry torpedos
the next plane we saw was yellow and could seat 2 people it was made of a light fabric so it could fly
we saw a plane that seated 2 people it was the son of the plane I just talked about it is a tiger moth and you can go for tours of gisborne in it for only 150 dollars.
we saw a large yellow plane and also a very large plane that we could go inside
then we went and had a look at the helicopter we got to ask lots of questions and go inside it.
it was super fun.
I like how u use paragraphs and i think u need to work on your capital letters.
ReplyDeleteI like how you told every little detail
ReplyDeleteIt looks good i like how much detail you put in but maybe you could not put an underline underneath your writing and you could add some more detail but above that it looks good.
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